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Beautiful Girl, You can do hard things.

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By Jazzy Published 2 years ago 1 min read
Beautiful Girl, You can do hard things.
Photo by Max LaRochelle on Unsplash

The rolling of the thunder is quiet enough to help us see

Through the rain as it washes over me

I prance in the cleansing, and I am overcome with responsibility

As my emotions rumble through the storm starting inside my ever-foggy mind

I claw through what I can’t see, searching for the beacon that is you.

The ever-present string is pulling me along, gliding through my fingers

I’m aware of this linear exchange between the past and present

Do I dare let you go?

I know where you are, this red thread tied neatly to you.

I clench the guidance as I start to run, I can’t see you, yet I’m running along.

The thread between my fingers, the flash of light, I’ve made my way out of the storm.

I did not let go.

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Jazzy

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Head of the Jazzy Writers Association (JWA) in partnership with the Vocal HWA chapter.

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  • T. Lichtabout a year ago

    wow. That was good.

  • Sid Aaron Hirji2 years ago

    The overwhelming persistent desire to let go, yet hold on amidst adversity is such a pedestal of strength

  • Joelle E N2 years ago

    This is one of my favorites of yours ✨⚡️ beautiful and inspiring.

  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    So inspirational & beautifully written! I love it!

  • I really loved the strength you portrayed in this poem!

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