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Bealach na Bà

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By S. A. CrawfordPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in The Road Drops Here Challenge
Photo by Bruno Glätsch via Pexels

Bealach na Bà -

The ghost of cattle pass in pairs,

shaking the car as gusts of wind,

and spread in the shifting grass.

Each hairpin turn a lifetime on the ascent...

and at the top -

just sky.

The world drops at the edge of the viewpoint,

a hard line between sky and sea,

calling the metal cattle onward,

over the precipice.

The road stops here on the far side of the world.

You can sway on the edge of forever,

watch as the mists are hurled over ageless stone,

and feel the tilt as wheels creep...

as the world shifts.

Hold your breath -

you're nearly at the end.

nature poetryFree Verse

About the Creator

S. A. Crawford

Writer, reader, life-long student - being brave and finally taking the plunge by publishing some articles and fiction pieces.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 months ago

    Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Simon Aylward4 months ago

    I have wanted to cycle up Bealach na Ba for a long time. When I do, I will take your poem with me and read it at the top, while enjoying a miniature bottle of Scotch malt. You have captured it perfectly in this poem. I can't wait to see it for real!

  • Very ghostly and beautifully expressed

  • Raymond G. Taylor4 months ago

    Highly evocative and inspiring. Rich with meaning

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