Bealach na Bà
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Bealach na Bà -
The ghost of cattle pass in pairs,
shaking the car as gusts of wind,
and spread in the shifting grass.
Each hairpin turn a lifetime on the ascent...
and at the top -
just sky.
The world drops at the edge of the viewpoint,
a hard line between sky and sea,
calling the metal cattle onward,
over the precipice.
The road stops here on the far side of the world.
You can sway on the edge of forever,
watch as the mists are hurled over ageless stone,
and feel the tilt as wheels creep...
as the world shifts.
Hold your breath -
you're nearly at the end.
About the Creator
S. A. Crawford
Writer, reader, life-long student - being brave and finally taking the plunge by publishing some articles and fiction pieces.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions



Comments (4)
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
I have wanted to cycle up Bealach na Ba for a long time. When I do, I will take your poem with me and read it at the top, while enjoying a miniature bottle of Scotch malt. You have captured it perfectly in this poem. I can't wait to see it for real!
Very ghostly and beautifully expressed
Highly evocative and inspiring. Rich with meaning