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Be Careful What You Wish For

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By IdoiaPublished about a year ago 1 min read

Once upon a time, there was a girl who, crying, begged the moon to please make the thoughts that hurt her so much disappear.

The moon, hearing her pleas,

granted her wish.

It made her disappear,

to the place where people rest in peace,

free of pain and suffering,

only tranquility.

There, she could no longer suffer,

because death, doing the moon a favor,

took her away,

even knowing it was not yet her time to leave.

inspirational

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Idoia

INSTAGRAM: idoiachz

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  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Sad but also a sense of freedom. Nice.

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