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I couldn't bare your loving touches.
I couldn't bare to see you smile.
I couldn't bare my bare chest.
I couldn't bare your love.
I'm sorry you loved.
I was selfish.
I do love.
But not.
You.
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Dana Hambleton
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Comments (3)
Oh, so powerful! Loved the "I couldn't bare my bare chest."...there is something so compelling about that repetition there ❤️
Excellent take on the challenge and I love the repeated starts of lines
This is good!