Baltic Broken Heart Check
Submitted To Break Up Nonet Challenge
Slovakia sent get well check, see
Your heart broke, needed sum money
They thought you had problems with
Maturing saved finances if
Deposit full tank
Ran dry none there
From affair
You had
Dad
About the Creator
Marc OBrien
Barry University graduate Marc O'Brien has returned to Florida after a 17 year author residency in Las Vegas. He will continue using fiction as a way to distribute information. Books include "The Final Fence: Sophomores In The Saddle"
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Deep , awesome lines