Astraeus paints skies
As lights frolic in rhythm
'Midst moonlit ballet
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Cindy Calder
From Charleston SC - "I am still learning." Michelangelo
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Beautifully evocative. Only just seen this and it conjures up wonderful astral imagery. Thanks too for introducing a new god to me Astraeus, which now makes a lot more sense of derivative uses of the name. I shall honour Astraeus and think of your poem this evening when I look up at the glorious heavens. Recent chill nights in southern England also present clearer skies. Thanks again
What a lovely poem 💖 just like some is dancing in the sky so gracefully
This is one ot the best I've read. Lovely haiku, Cindy!
Beautiful! ♥
Even your words dance, Cindy! Loved your sky-ku! That pic is spectacular!
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Beautiful, peaceful and such vivid imagery Cindy!!
This is incredible! What a wonderful rich haiku! Every line was deftly done!
Oh I love the Greek mythology in your haiku, Cindy! Brilliant!
This was so beautiful Cindy! I loved it!
A beautiful verse fitting a gorgeous piece of art, Cindy!
This is perfect! Nailed it.
Astronomy is wonderful and just full of poetry. Good work.
ohh wow, I love this one. great mix of movement and artistic color. wonderful entry.