Bad Dates, Dead Monkeys.
A Comedy in Spoiled Time.

The market stank of endings:
dates collapsing under their own sweetness,
flies waltzing over their wrinkled skin.
In the corner, two monkeys,
once kings of laughter,
lay stiff in their cages
little fists frozen mid-swing.
I pressed a date: it sighed and bled.
Best before yesterday, the sign promised.
A woman sniffed, shrugged, bought a kilo.
Hope has no nose.
What is life but a basket of bad dates,
a menagerie of dead monkeys?
Rot behind the laughter,
flies behind the feast.
The old man selling them grinned
three teeth, none in alliance
"Fresh batch tomorrow," he said.
Tomorrow?
Tomorrow is a shrine to rot,
an altar to spoiled sweetness.
Still we buy, we eat, we bury the pits,
we hoist the dead monkeys on our backs,
and march like kings through the stench.
Calling it a festival.
Calling it life.
About the Creator
Cathy (Christine Acheini) Ben-Ameh.
https://linktr.ee/cathybenameh
Passionate blogger sharing insights on lifestyle, music and personal growth.
⭐Shortlisted on The Creative Future Writers Awards 2025.


Comments (9)
Brilliant & lively Cathy! I love your writing style! 🌸
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this is great <3 I almost fill like I'm there
Oh wow, this was so deep. Loved it sooo much!
Wow, kind of a sad scenery. Love the way you described it so vividly.
Great poem!
This is actually so good. Love the grotesque imagery, and the critical mood. It reads like a surreal nightmare, with a festering sense of wrong. One of the best poems I’ve read on here- and proof that ugly images can still comprise beautiful writing. Well done Cathy!
Great poem!
Captivating poem and image are so impressive, good luck.