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Bad Dates, Dead Monkeys.

A Comedy in Spoiled Time.

By Cathy (Christine Acheini) Ben-Ameh.Published 9 months ago Updated 4 months ago 1 min read

The market stank of endings:

dates collapsing under their own sweetness,

flies waltzing over their wrinkled skin.

In the corner, two monkeys,

once kings of laughter,

lay stiff in their cages

little fists frozen mid-swing.

I pressed a date: it sighed and bled.

Best before yesterday, the sign promised.

A woman sniffed, shrugged, bought a kilo.

Hope has no nose.

What is life but a basket of bad dates,

a menagerie of dead monkeys?

Rot behind the laughter,

flies behind the feast.

The old man selling them grinned

three teeth, none in alliance

"Fresh batch tomorrow," he said.

Tomorrow?

Tomorrow is a shrine to rot,

an altar to spoiled sweetness.

Still we buy, we eat, we bury the pits,

we hoist the dead monkeys on our backs,

and march like kings through the stench.

Calling it a festival.

Calling it life.

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About the Creator

Cathy (Christine Acheini) Ben-Ameh.

https://linktr.ee/cathybenameh

Passionate blogger sharing insights on lifestyle, music and personal growth.

⭐Shortlisted on The Creative Future Writers Awards 2025.

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  • Tiffany Gordon9 months ago

    Brilliant & lively Cathy! I love your writing style! 🌸

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡9 months ago

    ⚡💙⚡

  • Mother Combs9 months ago

    this is great <3 I almost fill like I'm there

  • Oh wow, this was so deep. Loved it sooo much!

  • L.I.E9 months ago

    Wow, kind of a sad scenery. Love the way you described it so vividly.

  • Chris Liberty 9 months ago

    Great poem!

  • Sam Spinelli9 months ago

    This is actually so good. Love the grotesque imagery, and the critical mood. It reads like a surreal nightmare, with a festering sense of wrong. One of the best poems I’ve read on here- and proof that ugly images can still comprise beautiful writing. Well done Cathy!

  • Tim Carmichael9 months ago

    Great poem!

  • Rohitha Lanka9 months ago

    Captivating poem and image are so impressive, good luck.

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