Back Blast Battle
A humorous stacked senryu style with 3rd line of each being 1st line of next
By Andrew C McDonaldPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Infantry eat beans
An Odoriferous meal
Blast area clear?
Blast area clear?
Hey! That odor i’fer us?
Our foe beaten back
Our foe beaten back
Nostrils plunged, stomachs emptied
Victory assured
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Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
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Comments (3)
Hahhahahahahaha this was hilarious!
Lol love this. It was an fun read. And a very unique structure. Excellent creativity and writing.
I like this! Also thank you for your service, apologies for the odiforous beans lol