Autumnal Sensabilities
Falling Leaves
By Randy Wayne Jellison-KnockPublished 4 months ago • 1 min read
Photo by Niko Lewman on Unsplash
Sifting susurrance
of softening light & life
brittle, crisp & sweet.
About the Creator
Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock
Retired Ordained Elder in The United Methodist Church having served for a total of 30 years in Missouri, South Dakota & Kansas.
Born in Watertown, SD on 9/26/1959. Married to Sandra Jellison-Knock on 1/24/1986. One son, Keenan, deceased.
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Comments (9)
Excellent haiku, Randy!
I have to translate the first sentence, because the susurrance was a new expression for me, but I love the alliteration! Perfect haiku for the prompt!
Happy Birthday, Pastor Randy 🥳🥳🥳Enjoy your special day!
This was so beautiful. Loved your take on this challenge! How have you been?
Great imagery and texture of autumn for sure 👌
So sensational, Randy, soft and descriptive.
Beautiful work, Randy! Nice to see you here again, too! 😃
Lovely alliteration!
I can almost hear the leaves as they rustle round. Beautifully written, Randy.