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Autumnal Sensabilities

Falling Leaves

By Randy Wayne Jellison-KnockPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Autumnal Sensabilities
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Sifting susurrance

of softening light & life

brittle, crisp & sweet.

Haikunature poetry

About the Creator

Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock

Retired Ordained Elder in The United Methodist Church having served for a total of 30 years in Missouri, South Dakota & Kansas.

Born in Watertown, SD on 9/26/1959. Married to Sandra Jellison-Knock on 1/24/1986. One son, Keenan, deceased.

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  • Dana Crandell3 months ago

    Excellent haiku, Randy!

  • Imola Tóth3 months ago

    I have to translate the first sentence, because the susurrance was a new expression for me, but I love the alliteration! Perfect haiku for the prompt!

  • Mariann Carroll4 months ago

    Happy Birthday, Pastor Randy 🥳🥳🥳Enjoy your special day!

  • This was so beautiful. Loved your take on this challenge! How have you been?

  • Mariann Carroll4 months ago

    Great imagery and texture of autumn for sure 👌

  • Rachel Deeming4 months ago

    So sensational, Randy, soft and descriptive.

  • Marilyn Glover4 months ago

    Beautiful work, Randy! Nice to see you here again, too! 😃

  • Judey Kalchik 4 months ago

    Lovely alliteration!

  • I can almost hear the leaves as they rustle round. Beautifully written, Randy.

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