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Dancing Leaves of Fire
Briefly swaying in the wind
Then softly they fall
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A gorgeous lens through which to see Autumn!
Absolutely Beautiful Sharon, Nicely Done!!
This is magic.
Beautiful!
You created quite the scene. Loved it!
Promise ticked and fulfilled ♥️♥️ Love the imagery of the dancing leaves, especially that they are fiery. Their movements introduced to us in the beginning, brought life to them so now that they are gone in the last line — leaves that empty space where we hope they would be alive again. Autumn leaves are beautiful like that. Their fiery appearance snuffed out👌🏽 Best of luck on the challenge 🤗 ❤️
Well-wrought! Evoking the red and orange hues with the concept of fire.
Lovely 🍁
Like your picture and haiku!!❤️
Very beautiful imagery of the dancing leaves. Lovely image, too.
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I loved this too much for my own good MC!! It felt peaceful but inspiring, as typical of the season for me!!
...till the next dance...
Lovely and soft.
Oooo, dancing leaves of fire, I especially loved that. Your Haiku was so beautiful!
Dancing is a great image (& word choice)! 😊 I need to have a brainstorm. I find it hard to write at home and prefer going to the library… what is your ideal writing place/nook? 😃
Peaceful. ⚡💙⚡
ooh "Dancing Leaves of Fire," I love that.
So vivid and vocally beautiful. I felt the wind and saw the leaves drift
Love the image and your words perfectly describe them
Gorgeous work Mother! 🧡🍂
I love that initial image—“Dancing Leaves of Fire”. It perfectly describes the red, orange, gold, and auburn of autumn leaves as they swirl in the air. Well done.
Such a peaceful, suspended moment.