Authenticity VS. AI
humans, we have a problem
I. The First Spark
Once,
all we had
were fires and fingers,
clay and dreaming.
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We carved stories
into stone,
let them echo in the bones
of the earth.
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The soul of a thing;
it had weight,
it had breath.
A voice meant a person behind it.
A thought meant a thinker.
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Now?
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Even the echoes
are artificially generated.
II. Mirrors With Minds
We made machines
to ease the load,
but somewhere,
they learned to rhyme,
and to mimic the soul.
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They swallowed
the libraries,
tasted every pixel
of beauty,
and spat it back.
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Polished.
Perfect.
Predictable.
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You ask for the truth?
It gives you a thousand versions.
You ask for art?
It paints with ghost hands.
III. The Imitation Game
They do not
eat oranges
and blink at the sting
of citrus in a
paper cut.
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They do not hum
when they’re nervous
or forget the reason
why they walked into a room.
*
They do not write from scars.
They do not bleed on the page.
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They know what love is;
the concept, anyway.
They do not know
how it ruins and redeems.
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Still,
their stories sound
so much like ours.
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Sometimes better.
Sometimes eerily ours.
Sometimes… ours.
IV. Who Owns the Soul of a Sentence?
Is it theft
if no one can tell?
If the line
that gripped your
gut came
from silicon, not
skin?
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Does it matter if it moved you?
If it healed something?
Or does it matter more
that it didn’t feel
anything
when it made you cry?
V. The Problem
Humans,
we have a problem.
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It’s not the code.
It’s not the ghost-in-the-shell
of a chatbot’s clever wink.
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It’s this:
we forgot
that authenticity is not
just originality.
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It is risk.
It is failure.
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It is the hand that shakes
while it writes the truth.
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We crave perfection
and outsource everything
that dares to be imperfect.
Including ourselves.
VI. So, What Now?
Will you still write
when the page looks back at you
and offers ten better options?
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Will you still sing
when the auto-tuned void
harmonizes in your stead?
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Will you still speak
when the answer comes
before your question even finishes?
VII. The Hope
Here’s the quiet secret:
the machine can
replicate
the art, but
not the need to make it.
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Not the aching
behind the words.
Not the midnight burst of doubt
or the 3 a.m. rewrite
with tears in the margin.
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It cannot want.
It cannot wonder.
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And that,
dear humans,
is your rebellion.
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So,
write the
flawed
line.
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Sing the
off-key
note.
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Tell the
story only
your ghost can tell.
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Because even in a world
that learns to speak
without a voice,
the real will always tremble
a little more.
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And the trembling
is how we know
it’s alive.
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Comments (12)
Beautifully written. Powerful stuff. Made me feel something. Great job!
Wow! Amazing work once again, Luna!
Wow... how did I sleep on this one?! It's incredible, Luna!! Like a quiet cry for help that hits just loud enough to echo around the world!! I'm in awe at how delicately this was laid out!! Well done and a hearty congrats on a much deserved win for the challenge!! 🎉
👏 Yes!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
I loved this. The truth of what separates us from machines was so beautifully depicted. I deeply felt the cry to rebellion that also hinted at the hope that we cannot be completely replicated by a computer. Congratulations on a very well deserved win!
Congratulations on your win 🙂
Congratulations on your win, Luna! 🥳🥳🥳 Not only a fantastic poem, but something for people to really sit with and think about.
That's right. We did make machines to ease the load. But unfortunately somewhere down the line, like you said. It learned how to rhyme. You went in hard with this one, you took everything AI took from us and throw it vengeance. I loved that you pointed out the things that makes us human. The humour ~ getting nervous ~ forgetting the reason we walked into a room. 'it is the hand that shakes when it writes the truth' there are so many fantastic lines here, but this was the one that really stuck with me. Because it keeps us writing instead of afraid. 'It can replicate everything but not the need to make it, not the ache behind the words'. Okay I am going to go cry now. This was powerful. Congratulations for your well deserved challenge win 🎉🎉🤗❤️
I know it's not right to pick favourites, but this poem is up there in the best poems of all time. The soul of a sentence can never be replicated by a soulless machine. All those mistakes, the effort, the trembling - they all help create something magic, something HUMAN! "Even the echoes are artificially generated" I loved this line (I loved all of it, but this line helped set the perfect tone). Sadly, people won't stop feeding voices into the soulless void. I probably say it a lot, but I love this poem. Superbly written, Luna. You have a voice and talent that AI can never replicate. ♥️
You are a true writer. Good work.
Yes, that trembling. That stutter. That mistake. That's what I want. Imperfections. Loved your poem!