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Authenticity VS. AI

humans, we have a problem

By Luna JordanPublished 7 months ago 2 min read
Winner in Things You Can’t Say Out Loud Challenge
Authenticity VS. AI
Photo by Jon Tyson on Unsplash

I. The First Spark

Once,

all we had

were fires and fingers,

clay and dreaming.

*

We carved stories

into stone,

let them echo in the bones

of the earth.

*

The soul of a thing;

it had weight,

it had breath.

A voice meant a person behind it.

A thought meant a thinker.

*

Now?

*

Even the echoes

are artificially generated.

II. Mirrors With Minds

We made machines

to ease the load,

but somewhere,

they learned to rhyme,

and to mimic the soul.

*

They swallowed

the libraries,

tasted every pixel

of beauty,

and spat it back.

*

Polished.

Perfect.

Predictable.

*

You ask for the truth?

It gives you a thousand versions.

You ask for art?

It paints with ghost hands.

III. The Imitation Game

They do not

eat oranges

and blink at the sting

of citrus in a

paper cut.

*

They do not hum

when they’re nervous

or forget the reason

why they walked into a room.

*

They do not write from scars.

They do not bleed on the page.

*

They know what love is;

the concept, anyway.

They do not know

how it ruins and redeems.

*

Still,

their stories sound

so much like ours.

*

Sometimes better.

Sometimes eerily ours.

Sometimes… ours.

IV. Who Owns the Soul of a Sentence?

Is it theft

if no one can tell?

If the line

that gripped your

gut came

from silicon, not

skin?

*

Does it matter if it moved you?

If it healed something?

Or does it matter more

that it didn’t feel

anything

when it made you cry?

V. The Problem

Humans,

we have a problem.

*

It’s not the code.

It’s not the ghost-in-the-shell

of a chatbot’s clever wink.

*

It’s this:

we forgot

that authenticity is not

just originality.

*

It is risk.

It is failure.

*

It is the hand that shakes

while it writes the truth.

*

We crave perfection

and outsource everything

that dares to be imperfect.

Including ourselves.

VI. So, What Now?

Will you still write

when the page looks back at you

and offers ten better options?

*

Will you still sing

when the auto-tuned void

harmonizes in your stead?

*

Will you still speak

when the answer comes

before your question even finishes?

VII. The Hope

Here’s the quiet secret:

the machine can

replicate

the art, but

not the need to make it.

*

Not the aching

behind the words.

Not the midnight burst of doubt

or the 3 a.m. rewrite

with tears in the margin.

*

It cannot want.

It cannot wonder.

*

And that,

dear humans,

is your rebellion.

*

So,

write the

flawed

line.

*

Sing the

off-key

note.

*

Tell the

story only

your ghost can tell.

*

Because even in a world

that learns to speak

without a voice,

the real will always tremble

a little more.

*

And the trembling

is how we know

it’s alive.

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  • JP Harris5 months ago

    Beautifully written. Powerful stuff. Made me feel something. Great job!

  • Lucious5 months ago

    Wow! Amazing work once again, Luna!

  • Test5 months ago

    Wow... how did I sleep on this one?! It's incredible, Luna!! Like a quiet cry for help that hits just loud enough to echo around the world!! I'm in awe at how delicately this was laid out!! Well done and a hearty congrats on a much deserved win for the challenge!! 🎉

  • Leslie Writes5 months ago

    👏 Yes!

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • A. J. Schoenfeld5 months ago

    I loved this. The truth of what separates us from machines was so beautifully depicted. I deeply felt the cry to rebellion that also hinted at the hope that we cannot be completely replicated by a computer. Congratulations on a very well deserved win!

  • Congratulations on your win 🙂

  • Marilyn Glover5 months ago

    Congratulations on your win, Luna! 🥳🥳🥳 Not only a fantastic poem, but something for people to really sit with and think about.

  • Caitlin Charlton5 months ago

    That's right. We did make machines to ease the load. But unfortunately somewhere down the line, like you said. It learned how to rhyme. You went in hard with this one, you took everything AI took from us and throw it vengeance. I loved that you pointed out the things that makes us human. The humour ~ getting nervous ~ forgetting the reason we walked into a room. 'it is the hand that shakes when it writes the truth' there are so many fantastic lines here, but this was the one that really stuck with me. Because it keeps us writing instead of afraid. 'It can replicate everything but not the need to make it, not the ache behind the words'. Okay I am going to go cry now. This was powerful. Congratulations for your well deserved challenge win 🎉🎉🤗❤️

  • Euan Brennan7 months ago

    I know it's not right to pick favourites, but this poem is up there in the best poems of all time. The soul of a sentence can never be replicated by a soulless machine. All those mistakes, the effort, the trembling - they all help create something magic, something HUMAN! "Even the echoes are artificially generated" I loved this line (I loved all of it, but this line helped set the perfect tone). Sadly, people won't stop feeding voices into the soulless void. I probably say it a lot, but I love this poem. Superbly written, Luna. You have a voice and talent that AI can never replicate. ♥️

  • Mark Graham7 months ago

    You are a true writer. Good work.

  • Yes, that trembling. That stutter. That mistake. That's what I want. Imperfections. Loved your poem!

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