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As I Lie Down on the Meadow

I feel Zen

By Seema PatelPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
Myself on a wild oat meadow @Seema

Writer Franz Kafka once said,

"I don't feel particularly proud of myself.

But when I walk alone in the woods,

or lie in the meadows, all is well."

I relate to his words deeply.

Well, I feel good,

even when I’m not in nature,

as I do art, garden, childcare,

but when I am out there,

a happiness floods my being.

I feel alive, heart sings,

I belong there, fit in well.

My problems seem tiny,

I’m not bothered by agony,

I love this stress-free feeling.

Lying down on the wild oat meadow,

holding a mustard flower bouquet,

fanned by the spring breeze,

surrounded by lush greenery,

hills, and canyons scenery,

gives me tranquility Zen,

feels as if I am in heaven.

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About the Creator

Seema Patel

Hi, I am Seema. I have been writing on the internet for 15 years. I have contributed to PubMed, Blogger, Medium, LinkedIn, Substack, and Amazon KDP.

I write about nature, health, parenting, creativity, gardening, and psychology.

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  • Marie381Uk 6 months ago

    Beautiful so lovely 🏆🏆🏆🏆

  • It's like being in heaven on earth. Loved your poem@

  • Lovely!

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