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Are You There, Vocal? It’s Me, Again

A shout into the void

By Chloë J.Published 3 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - December 2022
Are You There, Vocal? It’s Me, Again
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The Greek gods were capricious

Of this all can agree,

Servants to their many whims

Bored of eternity.

Though worshipped by their people

They could not always hear,

If commoners were praying

Sometimes the gods did sneer.

//

The gods they were distracted

By games of love and war,

To play these games they needed

Great heros, not the poor.

Achilles, Ajax, Hector,

Paris, Odysseus;

Through all these famous fighters

Gods did deeds malicious.

//

So who could even blame them

If they forgot to heed,

The lowlier-type people

Who came to them in need.

After all, what enticement

Could farmers ever have

Compared to Helen’s beauty?

The gods could only laugh.

//

I wonder if the paupers

Grew tired of the gods,

Never seeming to notice

Or balancing the odds.

I think I know that feeling

If it’s not sacrilege,

To admit, I too wonder,

Where is my advantage?

//

It is not from the Greek gods

That I want attention;

No, it’s to the Vocal gods,

That I seek connection.

Challenge after challenge failed,

Nary a top story,

Maybe I’m just not that good

Not an “Ariadne.”

//

And yet, on Vocal’s altar

I will still sacrifice,

Hoping, like the fickle Fates,

On me, will rest their eyes.

If even for a moment,

If I, so bold, could be,

To lure the eyes of Vocal

From “Perseus,” to me.

//

I am a writing pauper,

I think I know my place,

Like the Greek farmers of old,

I’ll still seek Vocal’s grace.

If not, I’ll keep on shouting

Into the empty void,

Even if no one reads it,

My writing gives me joy.

///

fact or fiction

About the Creator

Chloë J.

Probably not as funny as I think I am

Insta @chloe_j_writes

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Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Dan McGinnis3 years ago

    Well done!

  • Erica Wagner3 years ago

    We’re glad to have you here! Thanks for being part of the Vocal community. You are valued.

  • Joe Young3 years ago

    I wondered where this was going at first, and when I discovered, it was a pleasant surprise. A great idea well executed. Thanks.

  • Kim3 years ago

    Ooooh this is so beautiful and confrontational I love it. I hope the Vocal Gods bestow well deserved praise upon you 🙏

  • ❤️❤️❤️ thanks so much all for reading!!!!

  • Hannah Moore3 years ago

    Well done.

  • You did it Chloe J. You got your Top Story. Congratulations! I loved seeing Ariadne's name in your poem. She was the "young lost child" (Endaira) who meets in a dragon in my submission for the Christopher Paolini Fantasy Fiction challenge. I guess Ariadne has her charm with Vocal :)

  • Gideon Brown3 years ago

    Ha, very clever. It’s meta-aware without feeling cliché.

  • Kendall Defoe 3 years ago

    If Swinburne or Tennyson had a Vocal account... Interesting work... 😁

  • KJ Aartila3 years ago

    Well done! Just keep writing. :)

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  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    Nice poem! Love the spunky title! ❤️

  • U.Rdiya3 years ago

    Nice poem. Congrats on your top story!

  • C. H. Richard3 years ago

    Congratulations on your top story! The Vocal gods did take notice. I really enjoyed your poem. Very clever and it worked. 🎊

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