Are You There, Vocal? It’s Me, Again
A shout into the void
The Greek gods were capricious
Of this all can agree,
Servants to their many whims
Bored of eternity.
Though worshipped by their people
They could not always hear,
If commoners were praying
Sometimes the gods did sneer.
//
The gods they were distracted
By games of love and war,
To play these games they needed
Great heros, not the poor.
Achilles, Ajax, Hector,
Paris, Odysseus;
Through all these famous fighters
Gods did deeds malicious.
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So who could even blame them
If they forgot to heed,
The lowlier-type people
Who came to them in need.
After all, what enticement
Could farmers ever have
Compared to Helen’s beauty?
The gods could only laugh.
//
I wonder if the paupers
Grew tired of the gods,
Never seeming to notice
Or balancing the odds.
I think I know that feeling
If it’s not sacrilege,
To admit, I too wonder,
Where is my advantage?
//
It is not from the Greek gods
That I want attention;
No, it’s to the Vocal gods,
That I seek connection.
Challenge after challenge failed,
Nary a top story,
Maybe I’m just not that good
Not an “Ariadne.”
//
And yet, on Vocal’s altar
I will still sacrifice,
Hoping, like the fickle Fates,
On me, will rest their eyes.
If even for a moment,
If I, so bold, could be,
To lure the eyes of Vocal
From “Perseus,” to me.
//
I am a writing pauper,
I think I know my place,
Like the Greek farmers of old,
I’ll still seek Vocal’s grace.
If not, I’ll keep on shouting
Into the empty void,
Even if no one reads it,
My writing gives me joy.
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About the Creator
Chloë J.
Probably not as funny as I think I am
Insta @chloe_j_writes
Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme




Comments (13)
Well done!
We’re glad to have you here! Thanks for being part of the Vocal community. You are valued.
I wondered where this was going at first, and when I discovered, it was a pleasant surprise. A great idea well executed. Thanks.
Ooooh this is so beautiful and confrontational I love it. I hope the Vocal Gods bestow well deserved praise upon you 🙏
❤️❤️❤️ thanks so much all for reading!!!!
Well done.
You did it Chloe J. You got your Top Story. Congratulations! I loved seeing Ariadne's name in your poem. She was the "young lost child" (Endaira) who meets in a dragon in my submission for the Christopher Paolini Fantasy Fiction challenge. I guess Ariadne has her charm with Vocal :)
Ha, very clever. It’s meta-aware without feeling cliché.
If Swinburne or Tennyson had a Vocal account... Interesting work... 😁
Well done! Just keep writing. :)
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Nice poem! Love the spunky title! ❤️
Nice poem. Congrats on your top story!
Congratulations on your top story! The Vocal gods did take notice. I really enjoyed your poem. Very clever and it worked. 🎊
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