Are you 'Iceland'?
A poem for the one with the coldest attitude...
From December til the January
But you being 'coldest' has to be; February
Doctor said, I'm allergic to a disease
If it gets on me, whole day I'll sneeze
I feel frozen, when you shake my hand
You're super cold! Are you 'Iceland'?
My tears can't melt you, dear Cold Stone!
No tissue paper—now I do feel alone
The measure of your hollowness is unpredictable
You're a fake snow-fall, whom I considered my home
You are a snowman, clone; I can't withstand
You're super cold! Are you 'Iceland'?
A butterfly through the gardens in spring
A girl, with 'Love', as her thing
She was a beauty and wanted a prince
'Being ruthless' was all you could bring?
A little warmth is, what I demand...
You're super cold! Are you 'Iceland?'
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Thank you, dear well-wishers
Your words of love and appreciation mean the world to me. Keep supporting. You're wonderful. Most importantly, this poem and any poem related to relationships has nothing to do with me; personally.
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Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
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Great job! :)
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Ohh! How profound! Truly, this presents an image of a relationship filled with deep emptiness, distance, and emotional coldness. I don’t know who you wrote this about, but this is certainly a very impactful, deep, and emotional piece. I hope they are still with you; if not, you will surely meet them again. This is a rare poem, dedicated to someone special. Very well done, my dear sister! 😊✨👏