Deviated from ways of life unintentionally,
It started with a smile as he questioned the rules and how I bend them.
Selflessly without care and for pleasure
Treading on thin ice, lost, and compelled to the edge of the mountain.
Roaring sounds from the skies prize my heart from my chest.
Acting careless like this means nothing.
Closure entraps us and fear instructs me.
Trainwreck is what they say when I appear.
In the maze of your mind am I invited to leer?
Only one way to find the effects of this here…
Neurotic, hypnotic notions you veer. Never mind. Forget it. Stay focused. Stand Clear.
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B.M. Delespine
Life is a gift made of words, thoughts, and feelings. Mine swims through the depths of the oceans. Yet at times, I find myself floating amongst the stars, and when that happens, its time to turn the page. Enjoy
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This was so poignant and emotional. Congratulations on your Top Story! I've subscribed to you!
This is lovely
very inspirational
One of the most beautiful and amazing thing which just showed to me up today, it's just a great way for motivating someone to never give up and always hoping for better things to come.
wow
I really like this his
Nice Compo
well written , congratulations on top story
Powerful!!! Wonderfully written!!!❤️❤️💕
Beautifully written!!!! Blown away :)
Congratulations on top poem! 👏
beyond ethereal. If you don't mind, kindly have a look at some of my posts. I'm a newbie here and need all encouragement to keep this ink flowing. Thank you
great piece
Very lovely. Train wreck is what they say when it appears.
Great piece. Congrats on the TS
How can I like this
Love the voice and flow, excellent poem!!