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Apparition of a Hermit

Poem - Some Thoughts

By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Apparition of a Hermit
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The crazy old hermit

Is how I sometimes feel

Anxiety and Amazon Prime

can keep me locked away

for days with no end in sight

Sometimes

When I go out

There's drive-thru

It helps keep people at a distance

Sometimes

Still

I love sitting in restaurants

or

Busy supermarkets

People are so wrapped up in self

It's easy to feel like an illusion

or apparition

In even the most crowded room

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection out now!

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶11 months ago

    I really like this poem of contrasts. Favourite section: “People are so wrapped up in self It's easy to feel like an illusion or apparition In even the most crowded room”🤩

  • I fear human interaction so much! It's like the most terrifying thing ever! Loved your poem! 🍩🥐

  • There's no place I feel more alone than in a crowded room.

  • So relatable! Excellent work

  • Mackenzie Davis2 years ago

    Ugh yes so true! There are days where I barely interact with anyone. So easy to do; almost harder to overcome it because other people expect no interaction. Ghosts talking to ghosts.

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