this is our sentence
effective immediately
and we, effete,
as if molten waxen effigies
are incapable of no more efforts
our emanations—nothing but
radioactive effluent flowing
down the sewers
an efflorescent inanity
an ineffable e(u)l(e/o)gy to
our flawed allergy
to being humane enough. *
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* (footnote): the opinions expressed above are those of the author and do not necessarily reflect the opinions of the editorial board.
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Though this critic & commentator agrees heartily (as the poem is applicable to him).
Brilliantly written,the inanity is frequent and obtrusive 🤍
Oooo, your masterpiss was the master of all pisses! Like Grz below, I did have to look up a few words. Your vocab is mindblowing!
So much wordplay Andrei, I needed too look up a couple. Such ideas here as usual but quite cutting. 😊
All hail the masterpiss! This is gutwrenchingly good!
No dismissing here. I love the scornful tone of this and the irony of something so well written possibly being overlooked. But not by me, Andrei. Your masterpiss is very much on my radar.
Ah, it stings doesnt it, when our progeny are overlooked. Good poem though! I love the word play.