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Angelique's Repose

prose poem

By Andrea Corwin Published 8 months ago β€’ 2 min read
Top Story - May 2025
(c) Andrea Corwin

Angelique hides quietly in a shrub as bees and birds flit around her. A ladybug climbs up her arm to rest on her shoulder. As she watches clouds, a napping, curled cat floats in the sky, followed by a strand of pearls spreading vertically and horizontally. There are many cloud shapes: eagles, mountains, a sleeping baby, and a canoe drifting along the sky river. Leaves brush against Angelique's immobile and ageless form, a concrete maiden frozen in time.

Squirrel sits nibbling, unconcerned, then climbs to sit on her head, and she giggles softly, shivering as his tiny claws tickle her concrete hull.

As rain soaks her, she yearns to wring out her stone dress.

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Winter ice crystals stick to her shapely form, and when spring arrives, she discovers new dimples in her intricate facade. The squirrel returns from hibernation, scratching at newly discovered textures as he scampers across her body. Soon, he brings his mate and their kits, who dig for seeds and play tag in the trees.

Angelique's head leans more, her neck stuck in position, her eyes hazing over. She hears the insects and squirrels around her, but her eyes can no longer follow them.Β Her breath blends with nature.

The squirrels visit yearly, enjoying the shrub's strong branches, which shade them from the hot sun and shelter them from pelting rain. Grooves from the squirrel's claws run across Angelique's figure, and rain runs down them in tiny rivulets, swirling across her stone.Β 

On a drippy spring day, a raccoon climbed onto Angelique's shoulders and leaped off in fright when her head fell to the ground. A bird found a site to nest under the fallen head's ear, but the squirrels and raccoons stole its eggs. After continuous rain throughout the week, Angelique's figure shattered like a hammer had cracked it, her broken body tumbling to soft dirt. The rain stopped, and the sun shone brightly under a sapphire blue sky, beaming onto her. Steam formed as the sunbeams roasted her damp, creviced body, spiraling upward, and she finally slept.

The squirrel family dug for food around her fragments, unconcerned by her demise, as a gentle breeze drowned out her last sighs.

Copyright Β© 5/24/2025 by Andrea O. Corwin

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Andrea Corwin

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Julie Lacksonen2 months ago

    Great job, and congrats on the TS! Certainly well deserved. πŸ’œ

  • What a poignantly beautiful Ekphrastic poem! I liked: β€œ Winter ice crystals stick to her shapely form, and when spring arrives, she discovers new dimples in her intricate facade.” & the conclusion.πŸ’–

  • Seema Patel8 months ago

    I love garden stories. Loved it, sad though..

  • Jay Baltazar8 months ago

    Good πŸ‘

  • Very well written. The detail is outstanding - the perfect balance of conflict and beauty. Exceptional work!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • K.H. Obergfoll8 months ago

    LOVE!!! Have chills at the way your words play against the mind. Fabulous writing. Looking forward to much, much more.

  • M.SUDAIS 8 months ago

    Beautiful πŸ₯°

  • Rachel Deeming8 months ago

    This reminded me of Ozymandias but a gentler, more reflective piece on how the statue is part of nature and can do nothing to stop its progress.

  • Lamar Wiggins8 months ago

    Beautiful imagery, Andrea! And congrats! 🀩

  • I have often thought about how the seasons might feel to an inanimate object...this was perfectly done. Congratulations on top story

  • Cristiano Ronaldo8 months ago

    Good πŸ‘

  • Zakikhan8 months ago

    Congratulations

  • Beautiful work, it's easy to see why you have a top story, congratulations, well deserved and thankyou for sharing xx

  • Paul Stewart8 months ago

    Love the descriptions and flow of this narrative so much Andi! the pics are great too! congrats on a stunning Top Story!

  • LouisePham8 months ago

    Nice Story

  • K.B. Silver 8 months ago

    I love the cozy atmosphere and the squirrel. I love squirrels. πŸ«ΆπŸ‘

  • Petther Herrera8 months ago

    Me parece extraordinaria la escritura y narrativa de este corto relato

  • D.K. Shepard8 months ago

    Great narrative piece, Andrea! And wonderful photos!

  • Kodah8 months ago

    Evocative! How can they be so cute but mischievous! Love this, Andrea! πŸ’–βœ¨

  • Ralph Thompson8 months ago

    Excellent work I like the squirrel, they are always looking.

  • Katie Erdman8 months ago

    I love the imagery in this. It caught my interest ant the Starr and held it throughout. I really love this piece!

  • Karen Coady 8 months ago

    So so so beautifully written. I grieved for her passing by the end. Terrific and tender images of her impact on life in many forms.

  • Shawndra Michell 8 months ago

    Beautiful! I thoroughly enjoyed this!!

  • Tiffany Gordon8 months ago

    Beautifully-written Andrea! Is that Wright Park by chance? 🌸

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