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Ancient Young Woman

We are the moon’s

By Ariana GonBonPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Letters to the Moon Challenge
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Ancient young woman

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We do not put wrinkles on you because we know you will not know death soon

But who are we to be shy to show time on your body?

Who are we to look down on the beauty of an old woman?

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Ancient young woman

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Keeping you beautiful to keep you small

Keeping you young to keep you naive

When you are the one who watched us grow

from creatures without breath

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Ancient young woman

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You - hunting

Artemis by Renee Ridley

You - torn apart

Coyolxauhqui by @barnyardjester

You - the womb breaking to water earth with life

Yemaya by Kypris Aquarelas (could also be known as Yemoja)

You, who will see the death of us

before drifting away to an orbit all your own

Pocketing the myths we wrote you

On a journey only you can wonder about

Nookomis Tibik Giizis (Grandmother moon) by @anetteprs

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About the Creator

Ariana GonBon

29yo bi Xicana. There's always more to write about, in more interesting ways than white men.

Instagram: @arte.con.ariana

For more stories unapproved by Vocal: colochosdeflores.wordpress.com

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  • Dalma Ubitz15 days ago

    this letter to the moon is my forever bias. gorgeous, gorgeous. all feeling. congratulations

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Sam Spinelli2 months ago

    This poetry has such a cosmic and universal feel to it. Love the concept of ancient youth. Also, good on you for showcasing real human artwork in your post! Beautiful pieces here, and it’s legit just great to see a human-made contradiction to the proliferation of AI visuals in online writing

  • Melissa Ingoldsby2 months ago

    Really evocative poetry 👌🥰

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