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Alone

Surrounded by people

By The Invisible WriterPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Alone
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Cold air seeps through my thin clothes, trailing icy fingers down freezing skin, while I wrap goosebumped arms tighter in this city of a million souls.

Hunger tastes empty and metallic in my mouth as people pass by on the street, not looking down from their warm lives, pretending I'm not here.

Restaurants tease my stomach, with the smells floating from their kitchens while I sit solitarily, wondering where I will sleep tonight.

Tears trace my eyes as I watch a child hold their parent’s hands, their face full of hope, their dreams still alive.

Car horns sing melodies with air brakes while I long for someone to talk to, for someone to make me feel like I don't have to be, alone anymore.

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The Invisible Writer

Life goals - vacation always- work never

Creator of unreadable stories

Writer of bad poetry

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  • Testabout a year ago

    i love this

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Oh no this is tools sad 😢

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    THere is such a fatalistic sense of hopelessness here.

  • Omgggg, this was extremely heartwrenching! Loved your poem so much!

  • Testabout a year ago

    Will, you so beautifully captured a day in the life of a homeless person. I especially love how you painted it with such vivid sensory elements that also feel relatable!

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    This piece is moving, deeply touching.

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    This captured that perspective so well. Such longing evoked brilliantly through the senses.

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Two things, there might be more, but hear me out. Love your updated profile lol. It's a quandry I am sure we all find ourselves in wondering about the benefits and drawbacks of the dreaded paywall. Secondly, this cuts deep. Really deep. I felt so bad for the narrator of the poem. Yet, I am just as likely to be one of the faceless people who just walks by them. Sad to admit that. It's sad that homeless is even a problem. Such a sensitive and well written piece, though, Will, you've been on fire with this challenge and this is just another amazing piece.

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