
i’m almost empty
somedays
i feel nothing inside
but nothing is good
easy not to see
even easier to hide
i'm almost empty
the greys become longer
this fog gets thick and stronger
and these ships
this passing of in the night
just more vessels
making noise
i'm almost empty
just a coupla rocks
rattling in my tank
in an ethanol haze
that slowly fades
and then it is gone
i'm almost empty
i feel like
i'm folding in
and upon myself
i feel like another
leftover extra
anybody else
i'm almost empty
and in photos taken i see
photos that make
my mind disagree
i can't see me
and all i see
is almost empty
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Comments (6)
LOVE! I have felt this before. So beautiful and deep.
wow wow wow :)
conveys a sense of emptiness and struggle. nice theme..
Beautiful. Thanks for sharing
❤️
Yes, exactly