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All While the Squirrel Monkeys Laughed

a poem

By Gina C.Published 23 days ago Updated 6 days ago 2 min read
Winner in The Last Flame Challenge

We were a firestorm.

We were born

from the resin

and rind

and animal lust of

what seedlings

and gumnut-husked spores begged

to smolder

and flare into bloom in

the rainforest.

We were a curse wrapped in love to

the tropic—

.

we were hypnotic

and gorgeous at first, then

a pyre—

chaotic, chaotic.

From the beginning,

we were ravenous,

s e r o t i n o u s,

and sap-to-skin ardent;

we were bestial—

a tryst to the howls

and rumbles

of apes—

we were pith-balmed

and primal—

a riot of light on the palms

and plumes of

the jungle—

.

and together

we tumbled

and snap-crackle-hissed to

our brilliant

and tragic

survival.

We

>>>>We

We were

an arsonist’s rival—

leaping

and bounding

from vine

to vine—

in a frenzy

of sparkle

and wildflame flash—

and oh, how we relished

the act

of etching our names in a heart among ash:

>>>Gina & Chino<<<

>>>>>forever<<<<<

>>>>and ever...<<<<

all while the squirrel monkeys laughed.

*

We became lava and tempest

incarnate.

We made love like

the coiling

of tangled-root-pulp at

the base

of a bonfire’s kiln:

kiss-flick & swill—

fizz-pop & snap...

We were manic

and rabid

then s l o w,

spilling slush:

a slurry

of cinder and steamfoam

to the sea’s lull and hush—

we swayed

and bayed between

hot molten rouge,

and violet,

and sapphire blue (in a cycle)

of soap opera-fuel for

the mirth

and glee of

baboons:

We were romantic—

oh, how we danced

and tranced

and put on a show as we

sipped the crisp rain from a chalice

of glass—

{crack, crack, crack...}

.

We simmered

and softened

and dreamed we'd be married

all while the squirrel monkeys laughed.

*

We were a volley of zeal

and passion

and oh—I was trapped in

the bioluminescence

and magnetic glow of

your eyes—

"This world is magic,"

you'd whisper,

"and we are organic;

let's fall asleep under

this blanket

of star-fireflies."

But oh, silly woman

silly rabbit—

fires don't last in

a tropical rainforest, where

the flora's too wet

to nourish and hand-feed

the flame

"I love you,

you are—you always will be

mi preciosa,

but you don't belong here,

and we're

you're out of savings;

you must leave now—

go home—

don't stay."

.

snicker-snick howl...

cackle-flick-fade...

.

We burned and we crashed,

we fizzled and dwindled to ghosts

of love's past

all while the squirrel monkeys laughed,

and laughed

all while the squirrel monkeys laughed

{and the fauna}

consumed our soirée.

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About the Creator

Gina C.

Poet | Author | Architect of Worlds

Sowing stories rooted in culture, origin, metamorphosis, resilience, language & love via fantasy, myth, magical realism & botanical prose

Writing my novel!🧚🏻‍♀️🐉✨

Moon Bloom Poetry

Gina C.:writes:.Fantasy

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  • Marilyn Glover2 days ago

    Congratulations on your win, Gina! I imagined the squirrel monkeys in the background laughing as I read this poem. You are such a creative talent.🥰🥳👏

  • Paris Rosemont3 days ago

    Wow, Gina - this is a powerful, evocative poem. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! 👏🎊

  • Imola Tóth3 days ago

    Congratulations on your win! 🎉

  • John R. Godwin4 days ago

    So lush and rich. The language embraces the setting and the tone so well. It's amazing that a poem that conveys such frenzy, such chaos, can flow so beautifully. This is an achievement and your win is so well deserved. Congratulations!

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Harper Lewis4 days ago

    Congratulations! Love, love, love this!

  • Hannah Moore11 days ago

    Some of the alliteration, particularly in the first half here, is so brilliantly satisfying.

  • Aarsh Malik19 days ago

    This poem is intense, beautiful, and heartbreaking all at once. The imagery stayed with me long after I finished reading.

  • John Cox22 days ago

    I know I have likely said this before, but you are easily the most sensual poet I have read on Vocal, and the jungle love amongst the howls and hoots of the fauna is simply stunning. The tragic return of reality in that tropical paradise at the finale is equally heartbreaking. It would be a crime for this to not make the winner’s circle, but good luck anyway.

  • The way they kept laughing made me very uncomfortable 😅😅 Your poem was soooo beautifully written, as always. Loved it!

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