Skeletons, clad in
fraying hems - seasonal reds.
"Whoooo..." goes the wind. BOO!
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Caroline Jane
CJ lost the plot a long time ago. Now, she writes to explore where all paths lead, collecting crumbs of perspective as her pen travels. One day, she may have enough for a cake, which will, no doubt, be fruity.
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This photo of yours is so nice, due to the angle. But the more I look at it, the more creepy it gets. This was a very eerie read. The branches like skeleton. Then seeing the colour red. Only to hear BOO as the wind, whooo. I love how atmospheric this was👌🏾👏🏾🤗❤️🖤
Daahlink Cj ~ Your ‘Hallowed Tree’ looks pretty ‘Hollow’ — care to add a little color with my set of crayons🖍..Hmm Your list of achievements are so marvelous — Good 4/U CalBud 🌹
BOO! Hehehehehe I loved this!
Supercute! 🧡🍂
This was such a fun haiku, Caroline!
It was very tense and haunting until that last line, which just made me laugh. Like you said, sometimes you have to have a bit of fun with these challenges. It kind of reminds me of the song "This is Halloween" from Nightmare Before Christmas, which is one of my favorite movies. So, well done!
haha I love the punch at the end! BOO! Good luck with the challenge!
Well, sometimes you have to have a bit of fun with these challenges. ;)