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Inward feelings

By Tales by J.J.Published 12 months ago 1 min read

That feeling when I’m with you

It’s different,

It’s like reading beautiful poetry,

It’s like listening to intense lyrics.

To me, it’s unique and rare,

A 40 kg weight on my chest.

Looking at all this again,

I feel special and beautiful,

Yet vulnerable,

For this love might leave me again.

Every heart has its hidden storms

Some show it,

Some never do.

That’s the only difference.

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Tales by J.J.

Weaving tales of love, heartbreak, and connection, I explore the beauty of human emotions.

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  • Mark Graham12 months ago

    This is a really a great love poem. Good job.

  • L.K. Rolan12 months ago

    Beautiful, I had to convert into pounds (because 'merica) but what weighs 40 kg? Is this the weight of your feelings or is this a pet? Or a very petite lady? Apologies if I've misenterpreted.

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