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Afternoon

Moon

By Colleen WaltersPublished 7 months ago 1 min read

With your borrowed torch,

Will you shine for me later?

I'll be awaiting here.

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It need not be yours,

as long as you shine it bright

I will enjoy it.

Haikunature poetry

About the Creator

Colleen Walters

Just a girl who likes to write poems, usually inspired by events and people in my Florida life.. Always be you, because you are awesome. You matter. You are enough.. ❤️

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  • Komal7 months ago

    Ahh, there’s something so relatable in that “It need not be yours” line as if saying, I don’t need perfection, just presence. Beautifully vulnerable.💖

  • Oooo, the concept of borrowed torch to represent the moon being visible during daytime is brilliant! Loved your poem

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