After a long week
"thoughts"
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After a long, busy week,
Here I am.
It is Saturday morning.
I am alone.
Resting.
My window is open.
A fresh breeze.
There are a few light rain showers outdoors.
Birds fly.
I'm watching from my window.
The gray mist is moving slowly.
Viewing it from a distance appears invigorating.
Enjoying nature.
Next to me, there's a cup of coffee.
I am fantasizing about life.
I wish I could relax like this every day.
I wish I had all I desired.
Sometimes life can keep me occupied.
Is there a way?
Will I ever rest and stop working?
How can I even get to the point of resting?
I wish I had everything.
I wish my life was simpler.
About the Creator
Gloria Penelope
Every creative piece is just me, telling a story. Enjoy!
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Comments (18)
Hi Gloria, This for sure is a TS in my view. The simple pleasures of nature, and the soothing ambiance of a rainy day with a cup of coffee beautifully captures the essence of finding tranquility amidst the chaos of daily life. Your words evoke a longing for simplicity and a deeper connection with nature that many of us can relate to. Thank you for sharing such a contemplative and calming piece. Warm regards, Jason
Beautiful! A well deserving story for TS. Congratulations!
Extremely relatable! Congratulations on Top Story!
If wishes were horses...all of us beggars would ride. Hope our days are filled with blessings. Congrats on TS. 1 reply
I love this. Best! Congratulations too on TS! π
If wishes were horses...all of us beggars would ride. Hope our days are filled with blessings. Congrats on TS.
Congrats on TS. Resting is for rest - so let your mind wander to nature and not work and worry.
Congratulations ππ for top story You're on a roll! Your motivation is igniting a path to greatness
Can you give me some tips to get an article published. My stories are getting rejected despite how hard I try. Though I created it on my own, it states my stories as spam or AI created content
Congrats on Top Story!π₯³π₯³π₯³
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ππππππ
So emotional and relatable, beautiful poem.
Really proud to se you with a Top Story Gloria! You are so open and relatable. YAY!!!
Ah! It is marvelous. The feelings are well crafted. Congratulations for the TS.
So, so beautifully evoked. What a well-deserved Top Story!
amen to the simple life! a warm cup of coffee and a good book is a vacation in and of itself
congratulations on TS. Yes, I know the feeling. I work as a home-health aide and my patient has dementia. I so look forward to my days off to just be me!
I think we all wish for the same. Loved your poem!