Aching to Know
An Ekphrastic Sonnet for Subtle Sirens

“‘Come here,’ they sang, ‘renowned Ulysses, honour to the Achaean name, and listen to our voices. No one ever sailed past us without staying to hear the enchanting sweetness of our song—and he who listens will go on his way not only charmed, but wiser, for we know all the ills that the gods laid upon the Argives and Trojans before Troy, and can tell you everything that is going to happen over the whole world.’" --Homer, The Odyssey, Book XII, Translated by Samuel Butler, 1900

Circe’s beeswax stopped the ears of your crew
Like all men, you were held fast by a mast
But your ears were vulnerable, we knew;
We chose just the right sonic spell to cast

Lust was not the secret to seducing you
Your heart belonged to Penelope fair;
You required a stratagem quite new:
Nothing mesmerized you like knowledge rare

Tales of the world before Troy was conquered
Glimpses of a future strange and remote
Secrets of nations through which you wandered
Polyphemus’ thoughts about that young goat...

Carnal appetites are easily stoked
By our music, your hungry mind was yoked
About the Creator
D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.




Comments (5)
Oooo, this was soooo well done! I freaking loved it!
Canny sirens.
Excellent!
Wonderful. I'm a HUGE mythology buff. Now you need the follow-up, with Orpheus. I wrote a whole novel about a contemporary singer who was a genetic throwback to the Sirens, and I introduced it with Oddysseus' experience, and inserted midway Orpheus' experience. Fertile ground for poetry, as you have proven,
Beautifully written!!! Excellent work!!! 😎