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A Vow

For D.K.Shepard's unofficial challenge,'Vocal Acrostic'

By Parvathi JPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
A Vow
Photo by Pranav Nahata on Unsplash

Category: Literal life

Vulnerable I felt at first to even raise the question of Why,

Obscured I was to connect the dots to learn, When,

Crouching my voices beneath the shoulders of Who,

Avenging my core self, carrying the weight of changes until Where,

Liberating into the wild, roaring my vows, making everyone wonder, What.

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Written for the D.K.Shepard unofficial challenge, 'Vocal Acrostic'

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Do read through and participate.

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Acrosticperformance poetryStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Parvathi J

Through my pages, I find the quiet complexities of pain dwelling in a solitary space, burdening life’s endless demands, and unburdening the voiceless noise.

Witnessing the questioning, I speak the deeper silence of my voice.

IG: shruthilayam

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  • D.K. Shepard7 months ago

    Love how you wove the questioning words into the end of each line! Great acrostic, Parvathi!!

  • Oh wow, that was extremely powerful! Loved your take on the challenge!

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