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A Twisted Tale

The Price Of Sacrifice

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read

While waiting to move Wynter into her apartment in NY. We visited an antique store and came across this painting. I snapped a picture of it, wanting to write about it.

This is the result.

**

A sacrifice, she thought not twice,

of offering every single thing she had.

Her little girl, with golden curl,

to the maker of the oddly made command.

*

Dressed her in white, to her delight,

she placed a tiny bow upon her head.

She paid no mind, pushed it behind,

the notion of the soon impending dread.

*

She made her way through narrow halls,

that led her to a door all painted black.

Is someone there, fearfully she calls,

the knowing now, insists, she must turn back.

*

The tiny child, now crying wild,

bounces and shakes, as they run into the light.

Her mother tries to calm the child,

from the terror chasing them out of the night.

*

Back in her room, she lays baby down,

sees a reflection in the mirror and cries in horror.

The little babe, she frightfully bound,

was not her bright child, anymore.

*

Under the door, she’d locked up tight.

the shadows appeared, greedily slithering in.

Her little girl, a vision of fright,

leaving her mother with a pile of porcelain skin.

urban legend

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 years ago

    Whoaaaa! You always blow my mind with your art inspired poems! Stellar work!

  • This makes me think of both the biblical command, "You shall not cause your children to pass through the flames to Molech," & the apparent violation of that command in Abraham's intention & willingness to sacrifice Isaac. I've long wondered what passed through Isaac's mind as he carried the bundle of wood for the fire, queried his father concerning the lack of a lamb, his father's dissembling, binding him, laying him upon the altar & holding the knife above him poised to strike him dead. What does that do to a child? I've also learned--not a good idea to use such ponderings as the subject of a sermon for baccalaureate. (I'd add a "lol", but I still shudder for my foolishness.)

  • Ruth Stewart3 years ago

    Ah yes. The empty child. Been there, done that. Sad indeed.

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