in the blink of an eye,
a tear drops by,
happy or sad,
a tear isn’t bad,
cleansing a pain,
cheering a gain,
a tear,
keeping us sane!
so,
let them flow,
down the cheeks,
they go!!
gently,
wipe them away,
and,
see yourself, this day,
as tears assure,
all will be, “okay”!!
there’s no shame in shedding tears, happy or sad, let them flow, thank you for reading 😊😊
About the Creator
Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
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Comments (7)
Lovely and lyrical! Great poem, Moe!
Seriously though, crying always makes me feel so much better. I feel it's a healthy way to deal with emotions
I wish all people understood the value of such emotion cleansing. A cool poem!
This is neat Moe! - “a tear, keeping us sane!” - I like that part a lot too. 👍🙂
Nicely done! And so true.
Oh, absolutely!! I'm a virtual water faucet. And yes, tears are very cleansing.
Beautiful poetry. Very touching.