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A Subtle Thing.

An unhappy marriage understood by the mind of an oblivious husband.

By Terrace GibsonPublished 5 years ago 1 min read
A Subtle Thing.
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It was such a small ping…

Barely a blip.

Yet it was ever-present; always there, sitting with a blank stare.

Easy to forget.

Hard to let go.

It didn’t act like the others.

They all seemed to burn brightly.

Its siblings could wash away an entire day.

But while they fade into wholesome memories,

The subtle thing wades into melancholy histories.

Ever-present and unyielding.

But never oppressive or over-bearing.

Whispers spoken in low, sobbing tones.

It shares the same stories.

A tale of loss after sweet history.

A prose of anguish after beautiful gatherings.

Broken by pokes and squeals.

But heard in jokes and suppressed words.

Unhappiness is never overt or outright.

It comes in the form of sweet times remembered through bitter tears.

It doesn’t explode or pop.

There is hardly a peep when Unhappiness saunters in.

Unhappiness was such a small thing.

Barely a blip!

I easily forgot it.

But, for her, it was hard to let go…

Unhappiness was always there, and it sat, ever-present…

In her blank stares.

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Terrace Gibson

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