Two years ago you arrived in a dream-a stranger
Last night in my sleep you appeared again
Should I hope that you will be my love across the room fate
That some magical voyage will bring you to me
One dream= you a ghost of a past love
One dream -the body of my desires- Where I shrink in shame that I am not the good girl that most men admire
My visions-your strong arms- open support
MY visions- I pray for you to be my future date/ the dream-ends- I am wrapped in your arms.
Now awake
Across some unexplored room, I hope to see your human form appearing to me soon
About the Creator
Antoinette L Brey
I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure
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So lovely and with such emotion, well done :)
This is beautiful
This was so beautiful!