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A story of two souls

Tragedy

By LuisPublished 4 years ago 7 min read
A story of two souls
Photo by Nathan Dumlao on Unsplash

This the story of two souls.

Half and half made it one whole.

Two stories but only one told.

As He sees her from across the room.

Her sexy moves and her sweet perfume.

Such a beauty and what should He assume.

" is it too soon for there to be a me and you?"

Love at first sight, i do believe but is it true.

Who?

What's your name and how are you?

She smiles and nods and says her name "I'm doing good and how bout you"

Before you knew it they loved Each other through and through.

A month goes by and it's all good,

they loved each other as much as they assumed.

With happiness and love they were

Consumed.

Though as time went by they got confused.

Three months go by and they start to see the difference.

Distance and conversations ending in a instant.

"Listen" " Cause what Im about to say you shouldn't miss it."

She says " i love you babe but I can't do this cause I miss him"

His world completely stops and he started reminiscing.

Thinking about all the signs and everything that he had witness.

He knew it all along but his feeble mind just wouldn't listen.

She pleads for his forgiveness but at the time he just wouldn't listen.

She says she just needs time but with time it brings more distance.

He says " listen, i really love you but how can I expect something different,

you lied and changed how you felt in an instant,

maybe I'm tripping

or maybe this was who you were and not the girl who I envisioned"

Some how they keep it going and as the months keep going by

They sit and cry and realize thinking bout all their pain and sobbing eyes and all them fights and endless lies.

they start to wish that they would die,

thinking back about a time when they used to feel alive

He tries and tries but he doesn't even know why.

He knows this shit is done and he can see it in her eyes.

Another month rapidly goes by and she's about to say goodbye as he visits one more time

but there was something different about this time.

She couldn't bare to say goodbye,

after 5 Days straight together their love had been revived,

They look up at the sky and start to think like how and why,

did I fall for this again and if we gon be alright.

"Oh my"

as he leaves they call each other and begin to cry.

He's going off to work as she's getting on her flight.

She's going off to school and he feels like he would die.

He can't bare to go through this pain another time.

They tell him it won't work and that she's seeing other guys.

He starts believing what they say and at home he starts to cry

She won't answer the phone so now he's really lost his mind.

" babe I'm sorry I was busy" somehow he knew it was a lie.

He called her on the phone repeatedly and she would let it ring all night.

He gets a message in the morning " hey is everything alright"

5 months go by and they start to fall apart

They made a promise to never break each other's hearts

She's starting to let go as he's holding on for life from the bottom of his heart

He calls her one more time but what he saw just made him fall apart

What he saw, he can't believe.

he saw another man laying in the bed of the woman of his dreams.

For a moment he felt what it was to be empty and cold

so he jumped out his roof to die with no soul

He survived and withstood breaking all of his bones

But there was no more pain then knowing his girl would never come home....

One day as she was going through the motions

She saw a man she liked but acted like she didn't notice

She blushes as he comes up to her politely

They start to talk and soon in love shes falling blindly

She's going through a lot but he came to her at the perfect timing

She tells him all her secrets and how her ex treated her violently

She tells him everything about her and she starts to cry

He pleads to her to stop that she's gonna be alright

She was cornered up, lonely and shy

Always asking why and wishing she would die

Till he came along and brought that spark back in her eye

Me and you 24/7, 365

"Ill love you forever" TILL the day that we both die

But the damage had been done

At the sight of love she would turn around and run

She lies to him repeatedly but she doesn't care and keeps repeating it

“I love you" and " i miss you"

He was fooled by all of this and didn't know the issue

She's thinking bout someone else while he was working trynna fix their issues

She needed time to heal but he was sure that he can fix her.

The more time goes by she realized

She wants to be the same and mess

Around with other guys

Since her x left and did the same might as well give it a try

He tells her

"i can't believe that you would lie, you can see I'm bloody, broken and about to cry".

All the times he would Try to make it right

And all the times a poem he would write

" baby I love you and I miss you every night"

He says "I'll be alright"

I guess she loves Sam Smith

Cause she was way too At saying goodbye

After a while to him she writes,

"hey I've been thinking bout you and there's a lot that's on my mind"

Without a second guess in his mind

He grabs the phone as she's calling and he hits decline

She starts to realize,

that she had lost the prize,

the one true guy that would have gave his life

and paid the ultimate sacrifice to see her never cry.

She tells herself "why did I do this to him"

She screams to god "what have I done"

even with all her losses he always made her feel like she had won

There can be a million girls but he'll find you first cause your always number one

Now she's laying cold and alone, numb and outta control, she's losing her mind.

Thinking she messed this up and lost the man of her life.

With love you don't play so don't roll the dice.

She calls out for god and he replys

“It's way too late now so don't cry out for help, You did this to yourself!

And now you have to watch the man you loved, be in love with someone else."!!

Listen cause this story that I'm telling you is true.

Iwas there and I witness what they had gone through

I tried to pull them out before it was too late.

They cried and they pleaded for Christ sakes

There tears didn't stop and flowed like a lake

If it wasn't him it was her

If it wasn't pain they were hurt

It doesn't make any sense but to learn

But learn they never did

Two young fools in love like little kids

Too young and dumb to realize there own doom

And on this date they set there own fate

One little lie and one huge mistake

They lost everything that made it feel great

Then the big lies came out and they built their own grave

So now both come to agreements and go there own way

At least that's what they said but it didn't last them five days

Back with each other like nothing had happened

"Dude she's a liar"

"bro it's just a bad habit"

"it doesn't make it better, in love Lies, you cant have it"

he won't listen to me and he just goes away.

I call him once more and tell to listen to what Ima say

"this isn't good and I can see on your face,

you know that I'm right that she's lied to your face,

I love you my brother but you've sealed your own fate,

so best get out now before it's too late."

These were the last words he would ever here me say

So I wake up the next day

And I hear what happened but I can't feel my own face

I can't believe this happened and what will I say

He found out about the guy that he's girlfriend would lay

So he went out to find him, he did not hesitate

He pulled back the Gun and shot him with no regard

He got to the roof and jump out again

But this time he made sure he wouldnt survive.

I lost my best friend to a girl but I guess since they met he was never really alive .

One week goes by and nothing's the same

I look at my phone

"10 missed calls from his girl"

I tried calling back but there wasn't a tone

I call up her fam and they say to leave them alone

I check on the news,

" a girl jump off the roof while recording it all on her phone."

Damn! Who would've known

heartbreak

About the Creator

Luis

I love poetry and writing in general.

Hopefully readers can see the picture I’m painting and visualize my stories as they read them

Love y’all ! Thanks for reading ❤️

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