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A Song of the Unformed Verse

Midword Rapture

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 5 months ago Updated 5 months ago 1 min read
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I am the writer mid-phrase

my quill a star paused in its arc

Ink lingers half written

neither carved nor dissolved

A spark of half born whirls

in the wide chambers of my spirit

not yet a stanza

but a pulse of something grand not written

The world sings with me

its bustle, its shine, its endless weave

A flood of soul's streams close to

the writer's keen hand

the boy's bold laugh

the elder's calm gaze

the poets fleeting vision

They merge and they blaze

each a light in the great fire

each a world within the worlds embrace

I am the bridge between memory's ache

and the pages unwritten oath

My soul a beacon turning

bound to no single star

The next line calls yet I dwell

held in this vivid stillness

each breath a hymn to the unpenned

the yet to bloom

Oh, fellow writers do you sense it

the swell of life in the mid-word

Where the spirit freed

roams fields of endless maybes

I hold no chart no scroll

only the rhythm of my halted quill

the earths deep song below

the heavens boundless arms above

In this instant I am all instants

past and future fused

the potter's unformed clay

the mariners untied rope

I ponder, I dream, I am

mid-phrase mid-thought ablaze

The cosmos unfurls

and I it's scribe

sweep ever forward

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Tiffany Gordon5 months ago

    Magnificent work! Go Tim! ☺️

  • Krysha Thayer5 months ago

    So relatable as a fellow writer. Absolutely loved this piece.

  • K.B. Silver 5 months ago

    Beautifully written. The image is nice too, it enhances the experience.

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