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A Soldier Waits

In A Foxhole

By Rulam DayPublished about a year ago 1 min read
A Soldier Waits
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Secreted away in a foxhole in silence

I watch in the inky deepness of night

Like a blanket, the heaviness of the inaudible weighs on me

Envelopes me in a hushed stillness of a fathomless pit

Night is muzzled and mute

Couched in breathless waiting

Ears strained_tuned to the slightest stirring of my enemy’s position.

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About the Creator

Rulam Day

In another life I was a pirate, a race car driver, and a spy. But those are stories for another time. Rulam Day is an anagram of my name, Mary Daul. I publish under both.

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  • Susan Payton10 months ago

    This bought tears to my eyes, because it reminded me of my son sitting in a fox hole during the Gulf War. Nicely Done!!

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    Captivating.

  • Anna about a year ago

    This was so poigmant! Great take on the challenge!😊

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