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A Smooth Transition

… through which we tame a rough condition.

By Tim GracePublished 2 years ago 1 min read
A Smooth Transition
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Where fibres fray,

and straightened grains are splintered

there’s an edge, roughly cut and jagged;

torn apart and broken;

crudely split and ragged…

‘a scratch’ if rudely spoken.

Where fingers play,

and subtle moves are hinted

there’s a rim, shaped to give good reason

to the curvature of lip;

rounded-off and even…

‘a catch’ for pleasure’s grip.

On edge we seek a smooth transition

through which we tame a rough condition.

© Tim Grace, 30 November, 2023

inspirational

About the Creator

Tim Grace

A first impression has a lasting effect - it makes a notable difference. In a subtle way that’s who I am as a poet. A ‘first impression’ looking for the gentle ‘twist’ that draws attention to a novel observation.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    Oooo, you definitely nailed the challenge! Loved your poem!

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