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A Silent Witness

Poetic Introspection

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished about a year ago β€’ Updated about a year ago β€’ 1 min read
A Silent Witness
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This is for Poppy’s September challenge. Link up here!

Mystery. Intrigue. The negative. These are associations we typically form with the crow.

While we may not feel positive about this bird, it does remind us to tap into our innate goodness.How would we respond if we were this crow?

πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ

I perch atop your window sill,

Watching you go by

I see all things, your quirks and spills,

Your secrets and your lies

πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ

Your deceitful treachery

As you shatter a promise made

Horrendous debauchery

With her, he’s been betrayed

πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ

He was one your truest friend

With whom you had great trust

But he now sees you as a fiend

Owe that to your lust

πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ

My wings flapping as he shouts

His temper now unfolds

I thoroughly enjoy the bout

The secrets first untold

πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ

I watch with glee, caws unrestrained

As you defy with pride

The friendship lost, fault unexplained

Truth cannot be denied

πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ

I perch atop your window sill

Watching you go by

I see you now, deflated spilled

When all you do is cry.

πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ πŸŒ‘πŸͺΆ

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Marilyn Gloverabout a year ago

    Michelle, writing from the crow's perspective is simply brilliant. I loved your response to Poppy's prompt! 😍

  • Fascinating use of the prompts from the crow’s perspective.

  • Poppy about a year ago

    Oh this is so beautifully creative and carried our wonderfully. Great poem!

  • Very thoughtful poem

  • This is a great take on the challenge and obviously we see a little Poe coming through

  • Whoaaaa, that was so intense and emotional! Loved your poem!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Really love this poignant poem.

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