A shattered heart
A heart once whole, now shattered and torn
A heart once whole, now shattered and torn
Memories of love, now faded and worn
A dream once shared, now lost in despair
Leaving a heart, broken beyond repair
The tears that fall, a constant reminder
Of love once felt, now lost forever
A soul once pure, now tainted with sorrow
Leaving a life, uncertain of tomorrow
The echoes of laughter, now replaced by silence
The warmth of touch, now lost in absence
A heart once beating, now left to wither
Leaving a life, empty and bitter
Oh, how the pain lingers, like a cruel melody
A haunting reminder of what used to be
A heart once full, now drained of all emotion
Leaving a soul, lost in a sea of endless devotion
And so the story goes, of a love once true
Now a memory, faded and blue
A heart once whole, now shattered and torn
Leaving a life, forever mourned.
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Sad 🥹But Beautifully composed 📝❤️😉