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A shattered heart

A heart once whole, now shattered and torn

By promise ohimuzaneme imodePublished 3 years ago 1 min read
A shattered heart
Photo by Arnel Hasanovic on Unsplash

A heart once whole, now shattered and torn

Memories of love, now faded and worn

A dream once shared, now lost in despair

Leaving a heart, broken beyond repair

The tears that fall, a constant reminder

Of love once felt, now lost forever

A soul once pure, now tainted with sorrow

Leaving a life, uncertain of tomorrow

The echoes of laughter, now replaced by silence

The warmth of touch, now lost in absence

A heart once beating, now left to wither

Leaving a life, empty and bitter

Oh, how the pain lingers, like a cruel melody

A haunting reminder of what used to be

A heart once full, now drained of all emotion

Leaving a soul, lost in a sea of endless devotion

And so the story goes, of a love once true

Now a memory, faded and blue

A heart once whole, now shattered and torn

Leaving a life, forever mourned.

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About the Creator

promise ohimuzaneme imode

A self motivated writer, who loves to write stories that ends up in vocal

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)3 years ago

    Sad 🥹But Beautifully composed 📝❤️😉

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