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A Rite of Perfect Oblivion

Incantation for the Unmaking

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
A Rite of Perfect Oblivion
Photo by Joshua Davis on Unsplash

When the raven drops its midnight feather

When the hanged man's breath stills forever

Speak this once in dying light

Then speak it twice when stars take flight

By the hush of moth wing's fall

By the web where shadows crawl

I unravel thread by thread

Till the living name me dead

Let the ink of gallows spill

Let the glass forget my ill

Let the worm my name engrave

On the lips of men in graves

Wind now wear my voice to dust

Earth now crack my bones to rust

Fire burn the last witness

Water drink my vanished kiss

No hand shall clutch my ashen sleeve

No eye shall trace where I deceive

No dream shall keep what night reclaims

Gone as breath from silvered panes

Three strands from a burial shroud

Three nails pried from a church's pew

Three drops from eyes that never wept

Melt them slow as time unkept

Should the mirror show your face

Spit and curse this hollow place

The spell is cast The wick burns low

You are less than shadow now

(Recite facing north Let the candle drown in its own wax Do not breathe until the flame dies)

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Aspen Marie 5 months ago

    This felt like breath on the back of my neck. Chills!

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