A Response to a Vocalist
Nothing would remain the same...
Note: I wrote this as a comment on the limerick below, and I was told that maybe I should post this on my page. I would recommend reading the link first and then looking at my five brief lines of thought:
Fair points made...
But let's make a trade:
No choice to choose?
We'd all soon lose
the freedoms we have betrayed.
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Kendall Defoe
Teacher, reader, writer, dreamer... I am a college instructor who cannot stop letting his thoughts end up on the page. No AI. No Fake Work. It's all me...
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Comments (19)
I am late, but well said.
This is one limerick I can agree with 100%. Congratulations on Top Story!
Congratz...
Congratulations on your Top Story and nice shout out to Thavien's poem!
congrats
Glad you published this! I agree.
Awesome ✨ 🎉❤️Congratulations 🎉😉🎉🎉🎉
A great response, Kendall! I can't wait to read your "Nantucket" series! (I'm so glad someone else is familiar with that.)
Too true! Congratulations on Top Story!
I agree ☝️ with your words!! Great job!! Congratulations 🎉 on top story!
I agree ☝️ with your words!! Great job!! Congratulations 🎉 on top story!
Congratulations on a well deserved Top Story, Kendall! 😁😁😁
Well said. Congrats on the top story
Congratulations on Top Story!
I appreciate the response, and also the thread this has created back to the original story!
Congrats on TOP STORY!!
Nicely done, Kendall 💕🙂
Well done Kendall!
Very nice. And so true. Yes, this is too good not to post, so glad you made that decision.