A Peace in My Heart
What you bring to me
All I have to do
Is dip in
and I see you
In all your glory
Master of the sea
Master of me
I'm all yours, giving freely
Giving all of me
to please
but not all of me
to lose
just
A dream with you
to create me in a new
new place
new space
You are my heart
spiraling in
dipping your feet
in my sin
sincerity
serenity
love
love me like I deserve
from you
a letter to be kind
the kind of kind that doesn't overmine
it brings about a peace
peace in mind
peace in mine
my heart
dripping with love
overflowing with it
never knowing if it
should stop
-
-
it cannot
the abundance is clear
I'll always meet you here, my dear
sleep with my head on your chest
Listen to the rhythmic sound within
life is a heartbeat
your heartbeat is my life
a life that I love to have
with you
my sweet
sweet, not like sugar
more like liquid gold
honey dripping from your soul
your soul
intertwined with mine
intertwined in endless time
a time well spent when it's with you
there's nothing else I rather do
you are my crimson heart
my breath
I breathe in your scent
it is giving
giving a feeling
of safety
something I have never smelt before
something I have never felt before
it speeds up my heart for more
more of you
that's what I want to do
ooo
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sinking in
with you I always win
no matter the outcome
because truth is present
and your truth is my present
A gift to cherish for life
just like the look in your eyes
eyes that make me dream
lose track of time
has it been 1 minute
or five
a grin that wipes me out
in this I have no doubts
it's spread across your face
and I cannot stop mine
i know it's there because of me
like mine is there because of you
a giggle escapes
you are my truth
my laughter floats through the air
and yours brings more
the waves of sound that grip my hair
and oh, how I wish
how I wish
you were truly there
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Challenge: Happiness and Light Unofficial Challenge Hosted by John Cox and Paul Stewart
About the Creator
Tanya Lei
A poet, if nothing else.
In a blank space, captivating words flow freely to create something that has not existed before.
From my mind, to yours.
https://www.instagram.com/soulpaintedart/
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Comments (8)
Congratulations on third place in our unofficial challenge, Tanya! We will send your tip shortly.
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Gosh, Tanya. Evocative as ever. Fantastic lovely and deeply sensual entry. Thank you for entering. I am reading the entries now and once John and I have sorted the ranking I'll be posting the results this week.
Your words are unstoppable, hammering out words of love. A very beautiful way of expression. :)
What a lovely and sensual love poem! Thanks for participating!
What an amazing piece of Writing, out standing wow. Simply stunning.
All of me to please but not all of me to lose. ☮️Okay. You can't stop getting me addicted to your style of writing. I am what? Let's count. Eleven lines in and I could not go on without finding something to celebrate. That was oh so lovely. Pushing and pulling. ☮️Sin Sincerity Serenity Man. It's like you know our sweet spot. ☮️Kind and overmine 👌🏾where is my highlighter. Someone fetch me a highlighter! The stop actually stopped. ☮️Track of time has it been one minute or five. I want to faint and fall all over myself. I am so very impressed. The almost, repeat is almost more effective than a full one. It keeps my mind focus as I follow the line and follow the meaning. ♥️🤗🖤
This would make a great song, for some reason I read it in my head singing it to a tune. :D