Echoes of the past, distant and powerful,
A lingering whisper, passing memories,
A love's fading echoes,
Abandoned in silent tears,
The soft sigh of heartbreak,
We split up alone.
damaged,
Farewell.
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Once again your poem evokes a familiar feeling and life experience. Not meaning to be a trite pollyanna, it makes me realize how growth happens. Being alone can be challenging especially knowing that feeling when one plus one equals more than two..
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