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A New York State of Mind

๐Ÿ›ธ Challenge Submission: Extra-Terrestrial ๐Ÿ›ธ

By EYHCSPublished 2 years ago โ€ข 1 min read

Laying in the grass of time.

I flipped my last dime.

I wondered if my thoughts were a crime.

In this subliminal world of mine.

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A touch on my face.

I felt your long extra-terrestrial finger trace.

You said you wanted to race.

I fell into your embrace.

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Letโ€™s see how the natives live.

I want to show you how to forgive.

Twelve juries deliberate until five.

I think the defendant is scratching his hive.

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The seats are cold and dank.

The room is dark and rank.

The prosecutor has already set out for the bank.

Too bad the verdict left him full of stank.

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12 Angry Men

Letโ€™s count to ten.

Who do you think will win?

Letโ€™s forget about this, and let's watch Big Ben.

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Let's share a meat lovers pie.

Or would you prefer a Rueben on rye?

Either way, the Big Apple is the place to be.

It will be just you and me.

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This world will deny your technological advancement.

I look forward to all your enhancements.

This is my one commandment.

Please do not leave me in disbandment.

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About the Creator

EYHCS

Poet by birth. Writer by craft. Artist by nature. I write poems, prose, short stories, fiction, and realism works of art dissecting the human condition and the resilience of the human mind. Many of my pieces are metaphoric stanzas.

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  • Testabout a year ago

    well done

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    Your rhyme is so sublime. Hi, you been missing for a while. I miss your wonderful works, just had to drop by for a visit. Great alien welcome to NYC.

  • Jay Kantor2 years ago

    Hi 'e' ~ You are such a 'Mensch' but whether 'Katz' or any Deli U.S.A. aย Sandwich now costs more than a day's pay. Permission to speak freely? I am not really a 'Poet' guy. So many Wanna-B-Poets that don't GiT it - its beginning to be a drag. As a simplyย StoryTeller I couldn't imagine writing as you do; either you Got-that-Gift or you don't. But, Daahlink, 'e'.... for choice of a better descriptionย - YOU so Poet-me! My Pleasure, 'j'

  • This was so wonderful! Loved your rhymes!

  • Forest Green2 years ago

    Nice poem of my hometown

  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    Fabulous work! Unique & full of depth & beauty!

  • Great scary poem! Good work!

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