A New York State of Mind
๐ธ Challenge Submission: Extra-Terrestrial ๐ธ

Laying in the grass of time.
I flipped my last dime.
I wondered if my thoughts were a crime.
In this subliminal world of mine.
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A touch on my face.
I felt your long extra-terrestrial finger trace.
You said you wanted to race.
I fell into your embrace.
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Letโs see how the natives live.
I want to show you how to forgive.
Twelve juries deliberate until five.
I think the defendant is scratching his hive.
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The seats are cold and dank.
The room is dark and rank.
The prosecutor has already set out for the bank.
Too bad the verdict left him full of stank.
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12 Angry Men
Letโs count to ten.
Who do you think will win?
Letโs forget about this, and let's watch Big Ben.
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Let's share a meat lovers pie.
Or would you prefer a Rueben on rye?
Either way, the Big Apple is the place to be.
It will be just you and me.
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This world will deny your technological advancement.
I look forward to all your enhancements.
This is my one commandment.
Please do not leave me in disbandment.
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About the Creator
EYHCS
Poet by birth. Writer by craft. Artist by nature. I write poems, prose, short stories, fiction, and realism works of art dissecting the human condition and the resilience of the human mind. Many of my pieces are metaphoric stanzas.


Comments (7)
well done
Your rhyme is so sublime. Hi, you been missing for a while. I miss your wonderful works, just had to drop by for a visit. Great alien welcome to NYC.
Hi 'e' ~ You are such a 'Mensch' but whether 'Katz' or any Deli U.S.A. aย Sandwich now costs more than a day's pay. Permission to speak freely? I am not really a 'Poet' guy. So many Wanna-B-Poets that don't GiT it - its beginning to be a drag. As a simplyย StoryTeller I couldn't imagine writing as you do; either you Got-that-Gift or you don't. But, Daahlink, 'e'.... for choice of a better descriptionย - YOU so Poet-me! My Pleasure, 'j'
This was so wonderful! Loved your rhymes!
Nice poem of my hometown
Fabulous work! Unique & full of depth & beauty!
Great scary poem! Good work!