Photography by Daphsam
Fine, have a bite or two!
It is my cheesecake
for heaven's sake
it's moist
it's creamy
it's a melt-in-your-mouth bite
a richness of buttery flavor
and aroma of warm vanilla that sings to my tastebuds
the hint of raspberry sauce with fresh blueberries is delightful
this dessert is really just for me
it's hard to share this rich, velvety mini-cake
you are really going to cause pandemonium if I don't share?
Fine, have a bit or two!
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Comments (11)
The picture is well-described in your poem, and it’s a good thing I’ve already had lunch. I like how the contrast of the frustration of sharing with the beautiful imagery and descriptions of the cheesecake, like “the hint of raspberry sauce with fresh blueberries is delightful”. Nice😊
This is so lovely and funny and yummy!! 💓🤩💓 xx
Funny!😅
Nope, if my cheesecake looks like that, no one is having it but me! LOL! Sweet poem (no pun intended) and great pix!
Yummy!!!💕❤️❤️
This is a delightful work. You created a mouthwatering picture for the reader by skillfully describing the sensory experience of indulging in this decadent dessert.
Nicely done. And that looks yummy.
Nice job. Now I want some cheesecake!
Thank you so much for sharing your poem and cheesecake with us hehehehehe! I loved it!
Nice job!
I saw this and I wondered if you thought a picture of a scrumptious-looking cheesecake would tempt people to open and read this. YEP! And I am glad I did. The poem is as tasty as the cheesecake! Well done, Daphsam! If we have a Vocal banquet, you are appointed to bring the dessert!