Photo by Diane Baker on Unsplash
feathers unburdened
home under the blinding sun
hawk eyes, God eyes—hunt
About the Creator
K. Kocheryan
I write, delete, write, and on most days, delete again.
Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insights
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Keep reading
More stories from K. Kocheryan and writers in Poets and other communities.
Violence Begets
"Any last words, cowboy?" "None you'd understand, sodbuster." "Funny. That's Marshall Sodbuster to you. But I meant some last nugget that would help us in the adjudication of the myriad offenses counted against you and your gang. I wasn't asking for penitence."
By Adam Diehl4 days ago in Fiction
Comments (14)
Amazing piece!
Congratulations on top story! I absolutely love "Hawk eyes, God eyes- hunt!"
"hawk eyes, God's eyes" I like that line a lot
so pure and amazing👌
So clever. Well done on your top story too.
Haunting and beautiful!
Wow! This is gorgeously written with a slight hint of the macabre. You've nailed the Challenge.
Nicely done! congrats on the TS.
Brilliant!!!!
God eyes - fantastic
Powerfully symbolic and impactful haiku. Well done. Congratulations, too, on the Top Story - it's well-deserved!
This was dope. Great work and congrats on TS!
⚡❤️⚡
That's a great haiku! Congratulations on your well-deserved top story! 💥👏