A Melody Of Unchanging Promises
When winds shift, But devotion stays still
In the prisons of loyalty,
Do punishments ever change truly?
Hearts shift with seasons anew,
But do winds alter their avenue?
All my prayers, my dear companion,
Are tied to you, my heart’s dominion.
If love is true and pure, divine,
Can prayers ever change their line?
Some uphold love while holding on,
Others cherish it once it’s gone.
Loyalty wears many forms and hues,
But does devotion ever lose its truths?
Summary:
The poem beautifully explores the timeless nature of true loyalty and love. It wonders if anything, like punishments, seasons, or even the wind, can truly change, reminding us that some things stay constant no matter what life brings. The poet pours out their heart, revealing how their prayers and devotion are entirely for their loved one, showing the depth and purity of their feelings. They also touch on how loyalty looks different for everyone—some stay true while together, while others hold on even after parting ways. In the end, the poem reminds us that real love and loyalty are unshakable, standing strong against the test of time.
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Comments (3)
A touching heart poem. Your words evoke a sense of longing, hope, and the enduring power of love.💖
heart warming poem 💕 Loved it, keep it up 🤝
You perfectly nailed the love and loyalty in few words ❤️😍 Keep it up Queen 👑❤️