A Love Poem
If mother nature were human, she'd wish to be you...
The blue in your eyes, makes the sky feel jealous.
The waves in your hair, fill the ocean with envy.
No one compares to your wonderous beauty.
Even the sunset watches you rest.
You're nothing short of sweet perfection.
A beauty, truly one of a kind.
Extraordinary.
Precious.
Amazing.
Divine.
About the Creator
Dylan
Hello, Welcome to my creative journey!
'20/20'
"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
By Sean Callaghan7 days ago in Beat
Comments (7)
The imagery conveys the emotion which is just how it should be. I love the gradual shift from long to short lines. Wonderful!
Love it, Sir! ⚡💙⚡
Short, sweet, and absolutely dreamy! This feels like a love letter wrapped in stardust. Simple yet powerful—every line a little spark of admiration. Whoever this is for? Lucky them!
The way you described the beauty with nature’s touch is just amazing. It feels soft, pure, and full of love.
😃 👍 I love this line particularly, “Even the sunset watches you rest.”. Terrific piece.
A beautiful up beat poem. The waves in your hair fills the ocean with envy. Just beautiful. Well Done!!
Beautiful imagery and And amazing poem!