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A lifetime

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By KimberlyPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
A lifetime
Photo by Léa Dubedout on Unsplash

You exist between,

Twinkling in your mother's eye

and one last goodbye

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Kimberly

I like to go deep, I love the great mysteries of life and have my own unique flavour of perspective and philosophy.

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  • Leslie Writes3 years ago

    Ooh. That is good.

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Oh wow, this was divine! You captured exactly what life is–all those moments in between. Beautifully worded as well :) You've gained a new subscriber. Looking forward to reading more of your work!

  • Loryne Andawey3 years ago

    Such a beautiful collection of words and that last line was an elegant twist. I notice you are new to Vocal (I got curious when you popped up in my Notifications so I went to your profile and found this poem). Welcome! I left my ❤️ and subscription :)

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