A Life
If we only lived for a day, how would you spend it?
Afire at dawn, dreams
play tag at noon before dusk
lets stars retrieve us.
About the Creator
J. R. Lowe
By day, I'm a PhD student, by night.... I'm still a PhD student, but sometimes I procrastinate by writing on Vocal. Based in Australia.
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If You Love Me, You'll Do It
I met Jason when I was five years old. I could say that I loved him from the moment I saw him. He was so handsome to me and I felt in awe by his presence. When they introduced him as the new kid in school, I wanted to be his friend right away. I remember it like it was yesterday. I remember his smile and how he didn't seem shy. He appeared confident and ready to learn. I waved at him and said "hello," before anyone else could even say a word. He sat next to me, and I asked him if he wanted to be friends. He looked so happy as he said, "Yes!"
By Sidney Smith (Sid Smith)7 days ago in Fiction
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Nice!
Beautiful, brings back memories.
Congrats Josh!! 💛
such a good poem
Makes me think of the classical "Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star". Congrats on Top Story.
Very nice!
Such lovely imagery in this one. Really appreciated that last line, it just summed up my childhood. Beautiful work. Congratulations on Top Story!
So much said in so few words. Powerful and beautiful 💕🙂
Hello, I absolutely love the picture, which brought me to read this incredible article.
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Fantastic!!! Loved it!!!💖💖💕
love the last line " let the stars retrieve us." Well done! Congratulations on Top Story.
Beautiful use of words and rhythm.
Congratulations, well done
Beautiful! Congrats on top story!
"...Lets stars retrieve us." What a beautiful string of words. Take my ❤, subscription and go 🤗
Wait what? I thought vocal wad about actually reading content. I have good content
Y E S !
This was fun. I could smell the night air in this one.
Gorgeous!! Congratulations 🎉
Just gorgeous. Well done and congrats on the top story.
Beautiful!
I really quite enjoy all of these visuals. I would have no clue where to even start answering that question. I do find myself getting hung up on the double plural. Other than that, this is super solid work.
That is awesome! Love the thought behind it and your beautifully-chosen words!