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A Drunk Poem for You

Something about ants and healthy love.

By sleepy draftsPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
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I thought it was a queen ant

pregnant with her babes

and saved her on the edge of a napkin…

Scooped her up and

let her crawl across my fingers…

returned her outside

where I pictured her laying her eggs

under an open lavender sky.

An hour later it returned.

You recognized it as a bull ant

and killed him instantly

soon as he approached

while explaining to me how much they hurt.

That’s it. That’s the whole poem.

Stream of Consciousness

About the Creator

sleepy drafts

a sleepy writer named em :)

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  • Tiffany Gordon6 months ago

    Love the juxtaposition between to worlds of thought. Very creative Em!

  • Joe O’Connor6 months ago

    I like how quickly the tone shifts with "and killed him instantly", and how all the hopefulness of the beginning was snuffed out just like that!

  • Sandy Gillman6 months ago

    Gentle hope meets harsh reality in such a simple, perfect moment. Loved it.

  • Caroline Craven6 months ago

    Oh this was brill Em.

  • Mother Combs6 months ago

    This is great, Em. Love this <3

  • Raymond G. Taylor6 months ago

    This is the stuff that poetry is made of. Loved the cover pic too

  • Hahahahahahahahahaha you gave me a good laugh! Loved your poem!

  • angela hepworth6 months ago

    This was so brilliant and contemplative—amazing work!

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